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Mr. Wonderful should have gotten shot in the chest instead. Here's how the rest of the installment should have gone:
[As Mr. Wonderful lies on the floor, moaning and whimpering, in a gradually spreading pool of his own blood, the Killer gets up and dusts himself [?] off, back to the camera. We cannot tell whether the killer is a man or a woman with a shortish haircut. The Killer then walks slowly, back to camera, towards Mr. Wonderful. His eyes are already beginning to get that faraway look of those who are about to give up the ghost, and his hands are scrabbling ever more weakly, first at the gaping wounds in his chest and then at his sides. We see him look slowly upward, trying to focus on the Killer's face. Incredulity and horror spread across his features, and he struggles faintly to raise his right hand and point at the Killer.]
MR. W: It's ... it's ... youuuu.........
[With a long, shuddering sigh that wracks his frame, Mr. Wonderful dies. His head sinks to the floor and a trickle of blood runs from the corner of his mouth down his left cheek.]
KILLER (in a malevolent whisper): Yes ... and it was worth it to hear you speak one grammatical sentence, at long last.
[The Killer leaves the frame and, as his or her footfalls die away, the camera lingers on Mr. Wonderful's face, now frozen in a death's grimace.]
[Fade-out]
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